Writing Chain: "Debate about success." by Class 26

When I started this essay, I tried to say about the unfariness about the success. But unfortunately others who wrote this essay changed it to a debate with a controversy that success is cruel or not. Even though the essay doesn't fit to my opinion at the first time, I am satisfied with in while we can share our opinion through this debate. And this is our strange essay, precisely speaking a debate.

   

  Pros:

Sung Jae: Success is cruel. As light and darkness both exist, there are some people who fail, if there are some people who success. So, this is why success is cruel. Like a society of animal, human's society has both strong people and weak people.

Young Il: Samsung or Apple are the one of them who succeed. I feel cruel about them because they used weak people like us and grow their company. So Mr. Lee and Steve jobs succeed, but we don't It's too unfair for us. Also, they have a lot of money, but look us. Did we get thousands of gold? We aren't. This is one of points that I hate success.

 Cons:

Justin: But I do not agree with that. Success is not something unfair. The pseakers in the upper are saying that everyone should succeed. But If everyone can succeed, how can you call that a success? Success is something that we don't see commonly : That's why people think it's important. Also, who said that YOU didn't success? You haven't even try to make a success in your life yet. Another thing, let's say everyone succeeded and became a CEO, then who's gonna work for the CEOs? No one. It's just a natural "Fact of Life." Next speaker, please continue your thinking.

Steve: Yes, I agree with Justin's opinion. If there was no success Korea including you can't be exist. I agree with Young Il that some of success actually harm people. However that never means that success is the negative thing. Success is very important to all people for their all sorts of thing related to them including dvelopment, life and technology.

Christina: I don't know why this paper or essay turned into a debate but if I have to continue on this debate, I agree strongly with Justine and Steve. It doesn't mean that Young Il is wrong but if everyone suceed in their lives, it's hard to call it a success. Of course success can be every cruel for some people but it doesn't mean they will ever succeed in their lives. Succeeded people can fail and failed people can succeed. It's like a game you can win or you can lose but if you try hard you wil not get the quote "GAME OVER" so quickly. It's true that success can be cruel but you can't say that works for every case. Young Il mentioned the companies and I want put some comments with it. Small companies can succeed if they work hard. So, it's not really unfair.

Conclusion:

Lily: I will conclude this STRAGE essay. T can't understand why this page changed to a debate paper. Even though we have various opinions on it but we can orgaize this tin two sides. One says it's cruel but the other says "No." Sung Jae and Young Il claim success is unfair for weak people. However, Justin, Steve and Christina said it's difficult to succeed everyone. In my opinions, if someone succeed in proper way, they have to help or donate for the poor. Then it will be fair for everyone.